Colourful End

by JelmerBV

in Literature

< 'Smiling Devil' by JelmerBV

Colourful End

It's the end of a beautiful day.
All that happened doesn't matter anymore.
We've reached the end.

All the colors are in the sky.
They slowly fade away.
We're leaving.

Sitting in this train reminds me.
Reminds me of the great time we had.
But if doesn't matter anymore.

The train is approaching the last stop.
The colors in the sky are fading away.
I look out of the window.
It's all I see.

Description

Jun 26th 2008
Tags:
colourful end experimental free verse narrative philosophical
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I've made this one while I was traveling by train.
I hope you enjoy it. ^^

Comments

Smiling Devil Says:

It's pretty, very pretty, but the .'s make it a bit choppy, otherwise: Great job!^^

SaisCy Says:

You know what I like it

shadowazar Says:

lovely