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Waiting
I'm waiting.
That's all I know.
I'm waiting.
That's all I do.
Waiting for my moment.
Just waiting for it.
I keep waiting.
Wait with me.
I'm waiting.
That's all I want.
I'm waiting.
That's all I love.
Waiting for the end.
Just keep waiting.
I don't know anymore.
Help me remember.
I'm waiting.
As far as I remember.
I'm waiting.
At least, I think I'm.
Waiting for the sense.
Just... waiting.
The music ends.
I'm still standing here.
I hear the rain falling.
I'm still waiting.
I hear the silence.
I'm still waiting.
Waiting, waiting...
Just...
I see...
There they are...
Finally...
...
?
I'm still here.
I'll continue waiting.
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Comments
Smiling Devil Says:
It's pretty good, though you made the beginning very slow, but this poem ends rather quick. If you understand what I mean
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Blakbird Says:
...Wow, this is awesome!

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vampire Miyu Says:
okay this is: confusing
,deep and cool!
shadowazar Says:
seeing as how you placed the lil landscape as th thumbnail to the actual lit. i imagined a person waiting on some kind of porch thingy overlooking the lake or soemthing. very good ^.^ i enjoyed reading it.