(:._Love is More then a Word_:.)

by Shadow Dinosaur

in Others

(:._Love is More then a Word_:.)

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~ Love can be so far away and yet it’s always near

It can give you something to hold onto in times where there’s fear

Yet it’s an emotion that can be felt by anything and anyone

Its shines like a beacon hope, like an everlasting Sun.

Why is it said that falling in love is for fools?

Are we subjects of unhappiness and destined to be tools?

No, I believe the love for another is a way for to see

How the feelings of the heart are strong for you and me.

To some love is just word, an expression that is empty,

Floating in the waters of the “deeper meaning” sea.

But I have always believed love can always be found,

It is never out of bound.

A love for a friend, family or someone really close,

Can share with you joys and sorrows the most.

The love continues to blossom and bloom when held on each day,

Whether the person or thing has gone or is there to stay.~[/size]

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Written by Orlens P.Ofori-Brown~Shadow Dinosaur~ -the Dinosaur KING ❀--

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Jun 12th 2008
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_love a couplet critique experimental general happy is more then word_
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Love is More then a Word(Writing)
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An Short Practise Piece
so i hope you do enjoy
what i have written here.

Some verses seemed to be forced in,
but like i said, I'm practising and
hoping to become better with words.

Please vote fairly

_Enjoy!!_
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Art Used from Source Below

(http://www.withlovegifts.co.uk/cache/love-gifts-sterling-silver-hallmarked-love-heart-sweet-5009302-0.jpg)

Comments

Hebi Says:

pretty good... but you might wanna spell check before you submit stuff

POPAROCKA Says:

❀Love is something that can be touched,
a dream that's effortless and limitless.

Very pretty poem... *smiles*

Shadowii2 Says:

Nicely written poem :)

demonuncle Says:

Beautiful, well done, it's very thought provoking.

Shady Says:

Very nice. ^^

Setsuna Motou Says:

I think you did a good job on this poem

MechMario77 Says:

... wow, great poetry... i didnt know you write poems before

but that got to me, great work.

wolf5674 Says:

Awesome job dude ^^ its so well written (I pressed the fav button not realizing it was a sharable )

Melina Says:

Nice poem. :)

One word of advice: Don't worry so much about finding words that rhyme. Don't let that affect the feeling of meaning of the poem.