You asked for criticism? Usually I try not to say anything bad, but I'll give it a try.
Firstly, it is a mess: no melody, jerky, bitty, too loud in terms of bass and simply just not a song.
Seriously, music is a very badly treated thing in SA, just like literature, but there are some things that make some better than others: you need melody. Be it a rap song or even a rave/techno, it must have a melody. Your song type is jut FAR too strange for the public.
Hmm..can't say this piece is as good as some others of yours. I do like this, but if you add a bit more, like a melody playin over the clipped parts, then it'd sound a lot better.
I couldn't help but notice that you're going to do a collab with someone on this. That'll be pretty neat to do, hope it's fun.
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Reebz Says:
Why is this in the Mindless Self Indulgence club? >:/
Fitos Says:
You asked for criticism? Usually I try not to say anything bad, but I'll give it a try.
Firstly, it is a mess: no melody, jerky, bitty, too loud in terms of bass and simply just not a song.
Seriously, music is a very badly treated thing in SA, just like literature, but there are some things that make some better than others: you need melody. Be it a rap song or even a rave/techno, it must have a melody. Your song type is jut FAR too strange for the public.
Sorry, matey.
adi93ulm Says:
dude..this song is pure madness
Merina Says:
It would help if it didn't have the clipping feeling.
DJ Echifox Says:
Hmm..can't say this piece is as good as some others of yours.
I do like this, but if you add a bit more, like a melody playin over the clipped parts, then it'd sound a lot better.
I couldn't help but notice that you're going to do a collab with someone on this. That'll be pretty neat to do, hope it's fun.