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Housefly
i can see it in your eyes
the second you go from indifferent
maybe even interested
to disappointed
knowing that all i must be
is another one of them
another little girl
with her own little dreams
and all you need to do is ignore me
and i’ll go away
like a housefly
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Comments
grievuspwn4g3 Says:
so sad. not bad, tho.
mercury yume Says:
I really enjoyed this, the actual situation is a little bit of a mystery to me, which makes it fun, it leaves it open for reader interpretation. The title simile seems a little random, but still makes sense. Shame about the punctuation in this one.
Kazy15 Says:
It's sad... although it's interesting you know.