.: Noir Odonic :.

by RaCaracal

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Description

Apr 5th 2008
Tags:
anthropomorphic noir
Views:
201
Comments:
4
Score:
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Note: I am aware of the following things:
* This is a Sonic fan character
* The body shape and proportions may be off
* I have not developed my "Eye for Shading"

I have only been drawing since the start of 2008 and still learning the basics. I appreciate all forms of CONSTRUCTIVE criticism as it will help me get better. However if all you wish to do is flame my lack of skills or my decision to make a Sonic fan character, please leave. By posting on the picture, I hold the right to delete and report any replies I view as flaming.


I realise how unoriginal Noir is. Cliché name, bat based fan character. To be honest I want to develop her into something more unique and original but I'm not sure how at the moment. As much as I want to develop her, I do like how she's evolved over the years.

Looking back on the image, I'm also unsure about the bust size. When she was first created I made her as a "Femme Fatal", hence the more sexy look. However she is a Sonic based fan character. It feels a bit, well, wrong to make one quite so risqué. I am also aware the wing may be to small, the legs could be thinner and the hands and feet could be better size and shape wise.
*points to the comment at the top of the description*
However like I keep saying, I am still learning.

Comments

Squeak The What Says:

Like I've said, I enjoy the shading, but of course you already know what you need to fix up, so I can't say I'll be much help.

KTUOS Says:

Duuuuuuude nah shes excelent, and if you see fault do what you can to improve in whatever ways you see fit I just see it as excelent anyway

KWolf 2K Says:

The pants-line needs to come up higher...

WhiteMageTifa Says:

she really sexy you make sexy bats i have to say