Rap Rock? Yeah.... pretty much. Sounds good though.
I finally finished it.
The vocals are sorta crummy, yeah, but I tried!
Enjoy!
Lyrics!
All the times I've tried to do the best
I could have sat alone and chose to do the worst
When it ultimately came to the thin end,
I finally gave in, and up to let it all just go to waste...
And so now I...
Wish that I could turn back the clock, and take from the dock all that is not
Giving me all this pain and agony, and taking away all of my civil liberties
I knew my freedoms would not last, 'cause the time to act came on way too fast...
I'm still wishing for the chance to say.
I hope there is another day
Giving me a chance to stay
Why don't I get a say?
Is there another way?
I cling on to my fate
Until it' far too late
Why do I choose to wait
Until it's the final date?
I tend to the path that never ends...
I wish that I could go and change the past
Work it out to make the good times last...
But the time to act comes way too fast...
And so now I...
Wish that I could turn back the clock, and take from the dock all that is not
Giving me all this pain and agony, and taking away all of my civil liberties
I knew my freedoms would never last, 'cause the time to act came on way too fast...
I'm still wishing for the chance to say.
I wish that I could go and change the past
Work it out to make the good times last...
But the time to act came way too fast...
Work it out...
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Comments
Streak Says:
Pretty slick~
I LOVE The guitar work, even if it's not in my preferred style. It's good and it fits and it's very clean, so excellent there.
The vocals are fine, and your lyrics are interesting too. xD;
I'm just mostly impressed by the quality of the mix and the recording, you put alot of effort into it I can tell.
Nice job. Rated and faved.
Shadow Dinosaur Says:
Elfofchaos Says:
heh, You know how much I liked this when I first heard it, still awesome effects all around man.
Chaoskitty Says:
Sweet, the vocals aren't bad. I like it.
AngelsDontKill Says:
This sounds a bit better than what you sent me, I love it! The vocals and such are strange (in a good way) which makes it more interesting to listen to, and the sounds you used were great. The vocals sound a bit better too in the beginning than what you sent.
Kulor Says:
What can I say? You pulled it off. The singing seems a bit flat in places, but it's never anything severe. Well-done!
SallyMusic Says:
Excellent, I will definitely start watching you.
Sausabe Says:
Drummer needs some work.
Really. 
No, really. 
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(lolninths. Maybe I'm just being a dissonance monger but I feel it'd fit well.)
The progression after the exposition kicked ass and I think you should have revisited it at least once more, it had some delightful dissonance. Sequence at 0:24 was a bit... stale and almost out of place. It tries to lead into the next progression but ends up a bit generic; you might have instead started the sequence a bit lower and done some spiffy counterpoint with something else. The bass also needs more articulation; it just kinda floats on the guitar line. FUGUE IT UP, JOHNS! Bass-counterpoint is what all true warriors strive for. Also the end was generic as well. You could have thrown a high E in there with the vocals. Depends on how many voices you had to work with but F, A and E would have been a sick way to end it, rather than run-of-the-mill Dminor.
Also don't be afraid to shout a bit more when you sing. You're Michael Jackson and your voice is your baby: THROW THAT BASTARD!
Yes, I'm aware I'm being a bitch: I'm a music major, now, it's just what we do. But I don't want to instill the wrong impression. I bloody loved it. You had some unique rhythm and the progression was pretty kickin'. I must say I'm impressed. Keep up the good work and damn it, don't let this critique discourage you.