"A&C" Page 6

by NAAN

in Legendary Beings Ara & Celi

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Mar 18th 2008
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Page 6 of my webcomic, which if you like, is here for reading :) http://revolutionmillennium.comicdish.com

The "BAH" effect in the 3rd panel still irks me; I like it because it adds drama, but it overloads the panel =\ Any suggestions?

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Demonhound Says:

I think the movement in this picture is good, but I think you could improve this art by doing a little more detail and by integrating the text more into the picture...
it's not bad this way, but the text does not really look as if he was part of the picture, because it's only at the bottom and you read it after you watched the pictures.