This is a really nice piece, I love her eyes and dress. Sadly, I can't give you any advice; and I'm not sure if you'll come upon a lot here on Sheezy :[
Well, it'll take a good bit of nitpicking to find much wrong with it, but I'll try. For one, I love the colors used and the hair, in particular.
I think the whole front of her looks a little too bright if the sun is fully behind her - the torso part of the dress, in particular. It stands out as being lighted from the opposite direction of everything else, particularly her cuffs and the backpack, because normally most of the front would be enveloped in darker shadows. The same goes for the front of the skirt; I think it might flow better if the whole thing was a shade or two darker. Nothing horribly drastic, but enough to let people recognize a single lightsource.
I like the little 'light balls' in certain places, like the grass and ground, but they look a little overpowering over her hair and hat, and on her backpack - it seems like they themselves are sparkly. If they're meant to be that way, well... that's fine, then .
It also bugs me a little that, other than where the light crosses the blades, the grass is completely flatshaded. It doesn't really 'fit' with the sharply shaded body and the rest of the background (which I'd like to see refined a little bit more, but that's up to you and your style )
Other than that, I think the only thing that bugs me is her feet - and I'm no expert on them. I just feel like the left (our left) one is turned a little too close to the camera, or that both of them might be scooted off to the right under her dress too far, but I could be wrong where that's concerned.
Ummmm... the way she's twisting her body seems a little abnormal and for the angle you see her feet at it seems to be a little bit off from the ground she's standing on, but that's all I can think of.
I really love how you did her hair and the light, the shadows are good too.
It's really lovely only thing I could say, is something about the perspective her legs and the way she's standing on the ground don't really.. match with the background, it seems like the road is precipitous then it looks by the way she's standing. Except for that everything seems perfect.
I really love this pictuer and if you want to try and improve it then well
Love the hair but it needs a bit more light to it, like since the Light's shinging you may want to put in a few lighter parts to the hair ... Oh I can't think of anything, I'm really looking at this picture and that's the olny thing I can sort of help you with ... It really looks like its out of an anime ^-^
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Raining Skittles Says:
This is a really nice piece, I love her eyes and dress. Sadly, I can't give you any advice; and I'm not sure if you'll come upon a lot here on Sheezy :[
Heliel Says:
Well, it'll take a good bit of nitpicking to find much wrong with it, but I'll try.
For one, I love the colors used and the hair, in particular.
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I think the whole front of her looks a little too bright if the sun is fully behind her - the torso part of the dress, in particular. It stands out as being lighted from the opposite direction of everything else, particularly her cuffs and the backpack, because normally most of the front would be enveloped in darker shadows. The same goes for the front of the skirt; I think it might flow better if the whole thing was a shade or two darker. Nothing horribly drastic, but enough to let people recognize a single lightsource.
I like the little 'light balls' in certain places, like the grass and ground, but they look a little overpowering over her hair and hat, and on her backpack - it seems like they themselves are sparkly. If they're meant to be that way, well... that's fine, then
It also bugs me a little that, other than where the light crosses the blades, the grass is completely flatshaded. It doesn't really 'fit' with the sharply shaded body and the rest of the background (which I'd like to see refined a little bit more, but that's up to you and your style
Other than that, I think the only thing that bugs me is her feet - and I'm no expert on them. I just feel like the left (our left) one is turned a little too close to the camera, or that both of them might be scooted off to the right under her dress too far, but I could be wrong where that's concerned.
Hope I helped a little
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BDTXIII Says:
is she lost????
MiyokoDosei Says:
cute!!!
sno otoro Says:
ooh pretty~!
nice work! 
Aidda Says:
Ummmm... the way she's twisting her body seems a little abnormal and for the angle you see her feet at it seems to be a little bit off from the ground she's standing on, but that's all I can think of.
Zoot Zoot Says:
If her knees are bent like that, they should make some imprint at the skirt.
TsukiTenshi Says:
I really love how you did her hair and the light, the shadows are good too.
It's really lovely only thing I could say, is something about the perspective her legs and the way she's standing on the ground don't really.. match with the background, it seems like the road is precipitous then it looks by the way she's standing. Except for that everything seems perfect.
kaseyyosa Says:
I really love this pictuer and if you want to try and improve it then well
Love the hair but it needs a bit more light to it, like since the Light's shinging you may want to put in a few lighter parts to the hair ... Oh I can't think of anything, I'm really looking at this picture and that's the olny thing I can sort of help you with ... It really looks like its out of an anime ^-^