Hmm... I think it needs a little more work.. like his sword is just SO huge.. O_O so.. I wanna trim that down a little.. and make it look a little better (I stink at swords) but other than that I like it..
I hope you do to..
I am NOT posting this on DA.. because I just don't want to.. I don't want people to fav when all I want is for them to tell me what's wrong with it.. =)
Ichigo, Bleach (c)Kubo Tite
Drawing (c) BeanSprout
Comments
Minomotu Says:
This is good. I think the sword is fine but maybe make the hair a little more spiky.
Alienated Corpse Says:
I agree with you on the sword a little. -Coming from one who fails miserably with swords. D< - ...but....aside from that, this is really good.
Alerane Says:
I think the sword's size is fine, its just where the colour divide on it is placed that seems off to me.
I love the drawing in general though ^^
ChibiIlliterate1 Says:
OHHHHHHH Ichigo!!
EmpressOfNoneckia Says:
I think the sword is just fine. The hair is what I think needs work. his sword is huge, his hair seems to have th wrong shape though...it's more round and smaller spikes.
This is great ^^ and i take it it was enspired by the new episode?
Naname Rei Says:
I cant find much wrong with it O=!
Your art seems too good to me
but yea.. I know what you mean about the sword D= it looks a tini bit fat
Jeffk38uk Says:
Considering his sword is huge i don't think it's too much of a problem, lol. But yeh, just some touchups needed but overall it looks pretty good.
T in a Yoshi Says:
Wow this looks awsome I love it

The only thing that bugs me with his sword is the waves in the center piece, the size doesn't bug me though