Courage

by JelmerBV

in Music

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Mar 5th 2008
Tags:
courage instrumental
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Inspired by one word (and playing random stuff on my keyboard); I like it when it happens ^_^
Is not finished yet by the way, but it's a random piece of music so I'm still submitting it as finished submission because I will not be able to make the same piece again I think :P

So; what do you think? (I know the quality is not very good this time and that I've made some mistakes, but ignoring that I want to know if you like it :P)

Comments

CrazyWolfman Says:

That'd make a cool backing or bass part of a composition. I think a couple of things that could make it better would be if you had a little more variation with some of the notes, so instead of repeating the same one, you could try throwing in a few split chords to the same regular beat. Alternatively you could spice it up by recording a more memorable or catch melody over the top in some parts. On the other hand I liked the progression in it, and how it all built up then fell away at the end as well as the off-beat timing of some parts, those gave it a pretty funky feel . Finally I'd recommend playing along to a metronome at some point, I find that to be a pretty simple way of getting my timing better, yours just needed a little work in places.

Anyhoo, I hope that's kind of helpful, I don't want to sound negative though as I did actually think it was a nice piece.

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