Set Me Free- WIP

by Hikara Productions

in Works in Progress

> 'Breaker n' Brooke LA' by Hikara Productions
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Mature Feb 22nd 2008
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chaos concept expressive graphic human overdrive text
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Still have to PS in a black background- there's too much attention drawn to Breaker's arm. :/

Yeah...it's nearly done. Just posting it up for the heck of it.

Breaker n' Brooke © to me. (Kiyo gave Brooke to me.)

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Noburu Says:

I find it interesting how you include an impressive amount of detail into certain things; for instance, I like the markings on the skin from the rope, and your hands have really improved over all. I think your faces are still lacking, however; facial expressions still need a little work, and I almost think the eyebrows are overly detailed, if anything; they look like furry caterpillars. Also, the line-quality is lacking, I think. The use of different thicknesses for the lines is fine, but the lines themselves aren't as smooth as they should be for something to be really impressive. But this -is- a work in progress, so I'm sure you have time to improve all that.