I wasn't aware Gibson made fret-less guitars. Is that a Gibson? 'sa lucky guess, I don't know guitars very well. Also, the spacing on the strings is kind of... off. And for all the detail you put in it, you didn't bother running the strings up to the tuners, nor did you detail the dials at all, and... is it supposed to be a regular body, or a rounded body? It's kinda screwy, with that. And Breaker's fretting hand... I'm sure you're aware that needs work. And it looks like you didn't give his picking hand a wrist? Huh. It also kinda looks like the mark for Brooke's cleavage is off... I get that her body is turned, but even still it looks like one boob is radically bigger than the other, haha. And there's something not quite right about her legs... given how low you made her skirt, it seems like her thighs are absurdly long. Does she just have hella long legs, or what? Also, what on earth is wrong with the hand on her hip? And... those EYEBROWS! [/flcl] And finally, the quality of your lines still hurts me.
But you're getting there. There's a lot of other, little things, but all are minute details I don't think you need to bother with yet.
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Destructive Forces Says:
It's like the guitarist is flipping me off or something....
Kay san Says:
Nice job on the guitar. I like this.
minwe Says:
Nice [ic! I like how you did the guitar!
Noburu Says:
I wasn't aware Gibson made fret-less guitars. Is that a Gibson? 'sa lucky guess, I don't know guitars very well. Also, the spacing on the strings is kind of... off. And for all the detail you put in it, you didn't bother running the strings up to the tuners, nor did you detail the dials at all, and... is it supposed to be a regular body, or a rounded body? It's kinda screwy, with that. And Breaker's fretting hand... I'm sure you're aware that needs work. And it looks like you didn't give his picking hand a wrist? Huh. It also kinda looks like the mark for Brooke's cleavage is off... I get that her body is turned, but even still it looks like one boob is radically bigger than the other, haha. And there's something not quite right about her legs... given how low you made her skirt, it seems like her thighs are absurdly long. Does she just have hella long legs, or what? Also, what on earth is wrong with the hand on her hip? And... those EYEBROWS! [/flcl] And finally, the quality of your lines still hurts me.
But you're getting there. There's a lot of other, little things, but all are minute details I don't think you need to bother with yet.