Edge Of The Desert

by JelmerBV

in Literature

Edge Of The Desert

Standing at the edge of the desert.
At the edge of reality.

Searching for water to drink.
For a solution.

Hearing echoes from people who lived long ago.
From your thoughts.

Thinking about where to go.
About your live.

Feeling the sun on your skin.
The sadness.

You know where to go.
Don't want to admit.

Just go.

Standing, searching, hearing, thinking, feeling, you...
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Feb 17th 2008
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desert edge experimental human nature
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When I was watching TV yesterday, I suddenly saw a person standing in the desert (in my inner mind theatre, not on the TV :P)

A (digital) cookie if you can guess all the themes of this poem :P (you need to tell why you think the theme is in the poem)

Comments

dakan Says:

great poem! much better than i can do lolz

vampire Miyu Says:

nice poem!
not even gonna try and guess the themes