Unfamiliar World

by sasmetalla2

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Feb 10th 2008
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A poem I put a melody to on the spot, recorded with a sup4r-cheap microphone, hence the suck xD Re-captured with Audacity and uploaded as Mp3 format as suggested by the awesometabulous Violet

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They turned me out in the world
The world they showed me wasn’t real
I turned myself out into the world
Had to teach myself slowly

Warped and jaded
Torn, forced-sedated
Telescoped around to tunnel vision

Taught me to master everything I see
If only everything was that easy

Love me, hate me
Feel me, I’m real
Don’t judge too soon
These tools aren’t chosen
I only use them to survive
And nothing more

My words will never
Be louder than my means
But if you hear my cry
Remember me
I’m out in an unfamiliar world
And nothing’s as it seems

Comments

VioletChaos Says:

Well if you want, there's a free audio editing program out there that's downloadable via the internet called 'Audacity'. You could always grab a copy of that, import your audio, and then export it as an mp3, since it has that capability.

Otherwise, pretty sweet sense of beat to the words/lyrics. Very nicely done.

TilasTrinity Says:

Oooh neat! Nice job. :)

Light Trainer Says:

Sounds cool!