i had no time to make any lineart so i just cleaned up the sketch a 'lil ToT
and i also added a "splash" of color
this is from (i think) july of last year
but it was the only finished sketch i had
and yes, there will be a Fallen Angel II and III and so on...
EDIT: arm has been fixed?
Comments
lilpiece2k5 Says:
your synthetic moon Says:
This is really good, except for her arm. It needs a little bit more detail so it doesn't look like it's too short for her body.
demonp3n Says:
all together i think this is an excellent piece. Though her arm looks a bit short to me. Perhaps you ought to work on forshortening. *i should work on it too.
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T a i K u nA Says:
Contrary to what the other comments say, I think the arm is too long.
I based it solely on the way you drew her hand. The angle of her hand suggests that her wrist is held higher than the rest of her hand and her forearm. So in 2D format, the forearm should be shown underneath the hand, and the hand should be placed above the elbow. Lol I wonder if that made any sense. @__@ But I think it's the easiest way to change it, since you shouldn't need to redraw the hand; it just needs to be moved.
vampirebride Says:
everything is good except for the arms! the dress is beautiful!