Gaia Commission for Paraphrase-You

by animemangakuryujiru

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Jan 16th 2008
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A gaia commission for Paraphrase. I think the finger is a bit messed up....

Comments

SrphmWlfYng Says:

Okay well, you recently asked watchers to give harsh criticism so here it comes:

The pictures nice, but the hands could use some work also his extended arm looks a bit strange, try looking at your own arm extended in a mirror and use it as a referance and his right is misplaced.

Hows that?

Minomotu Says:

Its very good. The finger looks a little big put its okay.

koshizzle Says:

i've always found it easier to draw fingers pointing slightly upward. the foreshortening tends to look better with the hand in that position than with it pointing down.