Definitely an interesting twist. It...makes you feel really awkward to read, but in this, case not really a bad thing.
I like it, but it's weird.
Wow. That was quite a pleasant surprise.
This is quite well written, but the message seems confused. Belle is secretly into bestiality, that's what I get from this. Your descriptive language is good, you ride a nice line, and you didn't make this overly soppy.
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Definitely an interesting twist. It...makes you feel really awkward to read, but in this, case not really a bad thing.
Ozzyturtle123 Says:
I like it, but it's weird.
oldsnowman Says:
Wow. That was quite a pleasant surprise.
mercury yume Says:
This is quite well written, but the message seems confused. Belle is secretly into bestiality, that's what I get from this. Your descriptive language is good, you ride a nice line, and you didn't make this overly soppy.