The part with the snail part is pretty nice, but it's all stretched way too long. It would be better if you've got the snail shell centered, and make surethere's as little black as possible. Basically: Cropping will be magic! This way with the lot of blacks and white apart from the snail shell the attention gets drawn to the black, which I believe is not your intention, is it?
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Parva lupa Says:
The part with the snail part is pretty nice, but it's all stretched way too long. It would be better if you've got the snail shell centered, and make surethere's as little black as possible. Basically: Cropping will be magic! This way with the lot of blacks and white apart from the snail shell the attention gets drawn to the black, which I believe is not your intention, is it?