Good attempt, and I really mean that, but it doesn't seem to me that you can hit all of these notes. A lot of them seem to be in falsetto or not even attempted, which makes you sound very monotone. Also, if you're going to do some sort of character whine-voice, keep with it the whole song. But there's a lot of potential.
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KittyCatKissu Says:
good job~
"aarrrttt" could use some work xD
i've been dying to record myself singing this xD
CrimsonEclipse Says:
Good attempt, and I really mean that, but it doesn't seem to me that you can hit all of these notes. A lot of them seem to be in falsetto or not even attempted, which makes you sound very monotone. Also, if you're going to do some sort of character whine-voice, keep with it the whole song. But there's a lot of potential.