Mirror

Mirror

Today too he is there, unmoving, waiting for me as every morning, every evening, every day of my life.
He looks at me, almost waiting for me to look back at him.
He then lives, he gets lightened up by a new life, secret and silent friend.
He will never tell what he’s thinking bout me, his nature forces him to observe, to perouse, to reflect.

He is the ideal lover, everyone would want him by her side: he understands you, he comprehends you.
Afterwards he changes expression, he silently observes my soul- miser prisoner of a prison made of bone and flesh- and he consoles it, he charges his shoulders with its sins, he forgives them.

How many times, during my hardest moments, he looked like he wanted to propose me to run away, exchanging my life with his, partner in a perfect crime.
Right afterwards, he would look at me with a playful eye: he seemed to say that I had bought it again, that I had to stop daydreaming.

Many times, while I looked at him, I had tried to understand what he wanted to tell me, what was he trying to make me understand.
I could not understand.
I could not understand.
I thought it was not important, afterall.

Then, how it always happens when something important is ignored, the catastrophe was almost reached.
That poor prisoner, that imprisoned and devastated soul almost surrendered.
Cause it felt alone.
Cause afterall we all are alone.
Cause no one can perfectly understand another.

But him, silent and immortal lover, friend, brother always was there, right where he stands now, looking impotent at me, uttering low moans to attract my attention.

Then, one day, it happened.
After so much time I could again hear his glass screams.
And finally I was able to listen.

He is very wise, few understand him, a lot ignore him.
He saved me from the worse of deaths, the inner one.
That day, when I listened to his words, he told me that I was not alone, that I will always have a person with me –a good or bad one it doesn’t matter.


This is what he taught to me: no one is alone, cause everyone is always with himself, just like the old song says.
Sometimes people forget it, but when they do him – the mirror- is there, and always ready to instruct them, dumb orator of many faces.
> 'The Kiss- Illustration' by TooMuchBlonde

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Aug 30th 2007
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angst blood dead death depression emo hope human nature mirror philosophical shards soul suicide
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I found this poetry I wrote in 2005 at school. The italian version is much better (it is a complicated language afterall), and the English one might sound a bit boring... I was thinking to submit the original text too, but it is quite useless since on SA there are not many italian-reader users

Please, if I made any mistake feel free to point it out and I will correct it.

My first attempt to poetry...don't go too hard on me


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Poem(c)TooMuchBlonde2005

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Preview image is not mine! It was found at >>SHUTTERSTOCK<<

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Translation note:
You must know that in italian, the neutral form (in English: "it") does not exist; It is considered as if it is into the male cathegory. This is why I preferred to refer to the mirror as "him" and not as "it"; otherwise the whole play on words would not have had any meaning after the transposition in english...forgive this poetic licence

Comments

beethovenbd Says:

interesting..a bit vague..but interesting..c'mere *snugglehuggle*

Taira7 Says:

oooh beautiful
good job

Merina Says:

You got my fav o.O

BlueEyes Says:

It's pretty and moving.

mater lupa Says:

I can imagine in italian it would sound very poetric..It didn't lost it's 'message' but the 'art' is gone. Nevertheless it is a nice poetry