aka the "I will make Heliel hate me" drawing
My half of a trade with

(that's going to teach you to do collabs with me

), I will link to Heliel's colored piece when she puts it up.
I just named her Laire... and apparently she's half bird, or something. I'm really not sure. About 10 hours from start to finish in Photoshop. I'd like to color this myself but it won't be for a while, har.
Lineart (c) RiDE
PS. Did you know it's possible for a human to live on a diet of Jell-o and water for like three days? >___>;
Comments
JWen Says:
Shoooo, but it's so pretty. How the hell do you do such clean, pretty lineart? >:U
Ahaha, I wouldn't doubt it if you can live off of nothing but Ramen for a whole semester. /isn't the brightest thing on the block.
Lasore Delecroix Says:
Gorgeous wings.
The line art is so clean and beautiful, and the details are amazing.
Oooh, so intricate with happy detail!

I like.
mrianna Says:
YAY! you're done!
's Looks awesome! 
Heliel Says:
hahaha, make me hate you? Au contraire, mon cherie, I think you'll find that this makes me faaaaaaaar from hateful.
Gorgeous lineart, too! 
.... too bad it's going to take longer than I'd like to get it done.... stupid computer and its needing reformatting-ness.
FJGamer Says:
I like it, but the wings are too symmetrical... on one side, she seems to be pinching her wing with her pole and arm.
Nanook Says:
Now, bear in mind that I am using the format given by your guide, to test its effectiveness, mkay?
The elaborate detail of the wings and the outfit is really eye-catching, and draws the audience in to study the image further. Upon closer inspection, though, it's a little confusing: where is her other arm (the one that's not behind her head?) I can't seem to spot it. All in all, though, a very crisp and clean piece.
...I'm resisting the urge to drop into all-out grovelling at your feet.
Resist... Resist... OH WOW I'M STILL IN SHOCK THANK YOU FOR THE FEATURE.
kenly Says:
wow. she's so pretty. you did a wonderful job! i know heliel will do this much justice. =3
Lil morbid Says:
wow, this is really nice. It's hard for me to find anything wrong with it. Save for maybe a little more line weight, but it looks fine either way, and I'd love to see it colored.
The wings look great, really great, and you did her left arm very well, and in such a difacult position. Also, the face looks great, I have a lot of trouble drawing faces on a full figure.