Little poem

by beethovenbd

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< Improvisation in c minor

Little poem

I love you to bits..I love you to pieces, I love you more then you might know
I love you to bits, I love you to pieces, if only you could love me though.

what is love, when one cannot feel
what is love when it isn't real?
I love you to bits and I'd wish you'd love me too
but forcing someone to love me is something I cannot and will not do.

> Audio version of the Alternative Fairytale

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Aug 24th 2007

Tags:: angst general human nature love narrative one philosophical poem romance sadness sided
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This is a little poem I made on 15.april 2006. I never uploaded it..but decided I might upload it today.

Comments

Frizzzard Says:

D'aaaw. <:U Sounds so sad..

Sanchu Says:

Aw rude you lil romancer! hahaha you wait a long time to upload this hahhahaha.

Grape juice Says:

This is a wonderful poem. very nice and flowy~!

I loved the consistantness of it too. repeated words and phrases!

Merina Says:

but forcing someone to love me is something I cannot and will not do. <-- that is a brilliant line.

6SIC6 MAGGOT Says:

I agree with Merina, "but forcing someone to love me is something I cannot and will not do." is a brilliant line.
This is beautiful

Merina Says:

It has frontpage and I took a screenshot of it B-)

mater lupa Says:

I like it a lot! More..more..more

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