Vivian: Redesign [Lineart WIP]

Hello! =D
Well, I've been promising art for a little while now...and though I haven't finished any of it yet(cough), I figured that I'd submit a little something to make the wait a little easier. =)

This is the WIP lineart of my P.S.O. character Vivian's redesign. I decided to redesign her character so that I can use her for my own comics, RPG maker games, etc and be able to blab about how I designed her clothes myself.
I'm fully aware that Vivian's face isn't there yet and that this has it's number of flaws, but thus far I'm very proud of it. I believe that it is, most definately, my best lineart so far.

I'll clean it up, color it and give her a face later, but here's what there is so far, folks. I tried to give Vivian's clothing design a quirky "I don't know how to get dressed", clashing with itself sort of feel(which will be more apparent when colored), and yet still appealing. I also wanted to do something that hadn't been done a million and one times before, so I hope that I achieved that.

Obviously, Vivian dresses more for looks than combat...considering that her definition of "combat" is standing behind friends, way out of the way of the action, and shooting spells around.