woo.
playing around with songwriting and such.
this is a super-short edit.
more later.
woo.
LYRICS:
This is something i've needed to say
will you write my words on your wrist with a razorblade
please no i'll make this all okay
--
i've wasted
your time
i've lived
a lie
and now
i need
to tell
the truth.
--
i'm trying i swear
to be honest, sincere
but ive been lying so long
i've forgotten the truth
hurting you was the last
thing i wanted to do
now you listen to me
i'm coming clean
spilling my guts
don't you spill yours for me
don't spill blood for me
(END LYRICS)
TREMBLE AS YOU BEHOLD MY METAPHORS
MWAHAHA
Comments
Merina Says:
Ahhh that's nice.
Alias Anonymous Says:
I wish I could find people like you in my hometown!!! Damn, that's awesome!
Cyril Says:
Sounds cool. haha. THE CITY DIES!
AT NIGHT!
I can imagine lyrics and stuff. so bad.
AngelsDontKill Says:
I love the sound quality you've got with this! The playing is great, and the song name is AWESOME. I would love to hear a final version with some lyrics and vocals!
speedmetalmessiah Says:
Well you can definitely play, no doubt about that. I liked the tone of the guitar, but the drums could use a little bit of work. Try throwing just a bit of reverb on the snare and then a bit of compression. That'd make it sound a lot better. You have a vocal melody in mind for the lyrics? If you do I could give them a shot.