It looks ok but here is some constructive criticism
? There is too much happening in too short of time, try to make it longer
? You only have some sound effects for some of the actions, try adding in more sound
? Add some more color and not just a little
? Make your lines thinner for the characters, they are a bit too fat
Comments
Dizzle Says:
There's somewhere static sound thing and it freezes up twice =/
Hampo Says:
It looks ok but here is some constructive criticism
? There is too much happening in too short of time, try to make it longer
? You only have some sound effects for some of the actions, try adding in more sound
? Add some more color and not just a little
? Make your lines thinner for the characters, they are a bit too fat
Checknux Says:
wiii...cool powers