A cheerful visit

Three days is enough,
Three days is the number when your patience have gone out
Three days is all we need, to get happy, to get pleased,
To be fed up with the fucking guest
We have to act normal with the polite touch in the edges
Cheerful we eat breakfast and play crocket while there is a silent war inside
Comments and remarks that seems to be fair
The fourth day is awful; the fourth day comes with the real personalities
The fourth day is the day when we wish that the guest will go home
The fourth day is the day when the guests wish they were some where else
We love when people wants to visit us
On the fifth day we hate that we ever let them in…

> Did I ever like you?

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Jun 25th 2007

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Ok this is a poemlike thing I just wrote this very evening/night (00.34)
so it's quite new.. My sister and her boyfriend went back today, and actually I think it was good..
But this poemthing then.. I thought about how long I can act friendly while I got someone around my neck 24seven.. and that isn't long... but I like to have guests, even if it doesn't sounds like that in this poem...^^

It was fun to write it, and it isn't that serious written.. but I think it got a point.. read it and and be honest to yourself, how long can you act nice, without acting abnormal?