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Finite
Someday I will fly,
reach the heavens
and taste the endless
forever of the universe
on my lips.
Soar among the stars
like a shooting stream
of unending light
painting a mural
in the sky.
Walk upon the nothingness
of the finite end
of an unexplorable now.
I will walk beside you
into the beginning of never
hand in hand
unafraid.
We will graze among
the forgotten past
and visit the future
that never was
and look upon forever
as we soar
through the heavens
hand in hand.
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Comments
monicachaloupka Says:
this is great^^
Pash Says:
Really romantic!
pH one Y Says:
Once again, great job ^^
that is truly touching.
Deathxx Says:
O.O a romantic poem!!!
Really good...Could imagine what was being told ^^
*watches you^^*
Grape juice Says:
Wow, this really gave me goosebumps. When I was reading it, I could imagine someone saying it just above a whisper with certain words emphasized. It's such a nice flowing poem.
At first glance I saw the structure and kind of went, "oh no...not this kind again." Because it's a growing fad amongst poets to just do a column of words. But this...man I'm so glad I read it. This is definitely a favorite. I think I'll go check your gallery out.
Rowan Says:
Chills and thrills.
Fantastic, as usual.
howlsawiz Says:
this is great! i love it.
absotlutly brilliant!^^
SolarIcarus Says:
Great job, definitely well written. Good choice of words too, simple yet aristocratic sounding at the same time. Keep up the good work :)
Smiling Devil Says:
It's very romantic, good job on that.