OK everyone this is one of my better first time practice comics
critisism is welcome but please remember Its PRACTICE!! I had to use photoshop becuase I don't have comic tones but thats ok!
Um I'm not sure I'm going to do pg.2 so um what happens is the guy is her step brother and she's going to sneek up on him and TACKLE him. He's been gone for 6 years and the last time he left he slapped her in the back of the head so it's kind of like "last hit" and she wants her revenge
Hope you like
Comments
sorachain Says:
Wow, I like it
good job!
HeavenStar Says:
great work, u should def get manga shop
Ashia Ryoku Says:
Cool that's gonna be really funny when he's surprised.
Kyte Says:
Whoa and that's PRACTICE? That's very well done and I like the whole tackling bit
Final Watch Says:
Wow that's amazing! Practice only..?? Looks really good for just a practice lol
mitsukichan101 Says:
I luv it
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P.S. where did dya get all the tones??
Kamao14 Says:
im practicing how to make manga too! lol yours looks great.