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How TheFallenOne Fell
How TheFallenOne Fell
High above the clouds in the land of the heavens, there lived an angel by the name of....well no one knew his name. He was never called anything nor was he ever talked to. The only person who talked to him was God himself...After some time, this angel was made into a guardian angel. He was to protect a human by the name of Shim, he was to keep him safe and always be by his side. This would be the first person who would ever talk to him...and that made him happy. This angel never wanted to be alone, but no one ever made any attempt to talk to him....this made him sad. Now he would have his charge and they would have to talk to him....but what he never knew was that this would be the last time he would ever see heaven and ever talk to God.
The day of the incident the angel was to go and protect his charge. God had told him that he would have to be very careful and not let any one see him, but he was too excited to think of that. On his way down to earth, the angel happened to see a field, but at the same time two other people happened to see him. The people in question were AkumaYoru and Da Hatter, these two friends just happened to be walking and see this angel flying down from heaven. Da Hatter was a girl of young age, she had blonde hair and wore mostly purple except for her red tie and white gloves, she also wore a big hat that covered her eyes all the time. The other, AkumaYoru, was a boy that was younger than Da Hatter but not by much, he wore a scarf and had black hair on top with a red piece towards the front, and always seperated by a headband. These were the two who saw the angel first....oh aint he lucky?
Da Hatter, stopping in her tracks, pointed up at the angel. Following her finger AkumaYoru looked up to see the angel coming out of the clouds. Da Hatter said,almost shrieking, “lookie, there is a bird-man an actual bird-man!” AkumaYoru said, “lets eat it, it looks mighty tasty, especially those wings.” Finally after some fighting over what to do with it they decided to just shoot the “bird-man” down and then figure out what to do with it. So Da Hatter, always being prepared, flipped off her hat and pulled out a bazooka and aimed it at the angel. With a big KABOOM! Which shook the ground, the angel fell, and finally hit the ground with a thump! Da Hatter and AkumaYoru both ran for the fallen angel and looked at it closely, then both kicked it. The angel groaned, and both AkumaYoru and Da Hatter jumped back with shock! Da Hatter said, “the bird man can speak!” Regaining conciousness the angel looked at his on lookers, then he got up. AkumaYoru, giving up hope to eat him, said “does bird-man have a name?” The angel looking at him said, “first off I am no 'bird-man,' secondly i cant remember my name!” Da Hatter and AkumaYoru both looking at each other said at the same time, “then we will call you TheFallenOne, and we will make you better, you'll see.” Never feeling real kindness towards him, TheFallenOne accepted their offer.
So that is my story, I am TheFallenOne, or F.O. For short, am here on earth thanks to my best friends. The time I have been here, I have learned the ways of the humans. My powers are gone due to the broken wing, but in time it will heal.
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Comments
AkumaYoru Says:
lol! Shim?
YEARH! LETS EAT HIM!! Ha ha...and when you recover...YOU SHALL BE IN MA BEELEH!!
SakoTheFox Says:
o3o *brings out pretty blue bandage and wraps up F.O.'s wing*
DaHatter Says:
Ya..*sigh* I was hopping to find out what 'bird-people' taste like too....YORU-KUUN!!! YOU BETTER SHARE!!!
aneki no naruto Says:
that was really good. it was cute and funny, and while the technicalities of the actually writing could have been better, it's not illegible, and that's all i ask for. good job.~
danyelle Says:
yes she told me of ur menny adventures sound so like her...crazy...
...like i can talk.
PantherChick Says:
Not bad for someone who's not a writer.
I'm a writer myself, so as such, there are a few things I would change around, but I won't go into it. It's your story, not mine.