again dude lol it was good im not just saying that either its stuff like this that makes me actually stop and read then think about it then read it a gain
yes i was right nest to you when you wrote this Will....
I really liked how this progressed through not knowing, and the repetition of such, to the final "I already know why" that ironically enough leaves the reader not knowing. Nice ending touch.
I like the way you progressed from the not knowing to knowing^^
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Pyrotactics Says:
again dude lol it was good
im not just saying that either
its stuff like this that makes me actually stop and read then think about it then read it a gain
thisarson13 Says:
yes i was right nest to you when you wrote this Will....
avisthecrow Says:
I really liked how this progressed through not knowing, and the repetition of such, to the final "I already know why" that ironically enough leaves the reader not knowing. Nice ending touch.
Smiling Devil Says:
I like the way you progressed from the not knowing to knowing^^