"I can't have flaws in my plan any longer. Before it caused my downfall, but nothing of that sort will happen this time. Everything is calculated and flawless, and I will not allow anything less."
Haha, as much as I love reading about my favorite characters, I have to say I enjoyed Leo the most in this chapter--you had a lot of good character quirks that made him palpable and real as a person. (Tugging his hair, the fire feeling at his fingertips, nodding before he really understands the statement, and so forth.)
-roll around spazz-...er excuse me Im not getting enough sleep
i think that chapter was awsome, really enjoyed reading it. despite apoc downfalls ahead i cant wait to see whats going to happen :3
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avisthecrow Says:
Haha, as much as I love reading about my favorite characters, I have to say I enjoyed Leo the most in this chapter--you had a lot of good character quirks that made him palpable and real as a person. (Tugging his hair, the fire feeling at his fingertips, nodding before he really understands the statement, and so forth.)
Karasu Sensei Says:
-roll around spazz-...er excuse me Im not getting enough sleep
i think that chapter was awsome, really enjoyed reading it. despite apoc downfalls ahead i cant wait to see whats going to happen :3
Lilium1 Says:
All I could think of while reading this was like..water and stuff!
YEAH IM SUCH A NON COMFORMIST THAT I'LL POST A COMMENT THATS COMPLETELY OF FTOPIC
kaesoflare Says:
i knew it...
kaesoflare Says:
i am always right about characters in stories erick haha