Do I need to fix anything? I want this one to be PERFECT. Daisuke's mouth is kind of too high up even though I moved it down wtf. That I can't fix.
Ignore that line in the screentone underneath Daisuke's chin, text is going there.
They're both men
MEN.
Comments
chibinarusegawa Says:
They're actually drawn very well, nice job on the inking too ^^
keiva som ko Says:
Men? Seriously? LOL!

I think it looks awesome! Keep it up!
Mayel Says:
ooo I like =D I think they look fine! ^^ keep it up ^.~
Naikou Says:
I like it as is, looks really good!
EmperorNortonII Says:
I like the line work here.
KakeranoTsuki Says:
SEXY MEN. xD *couldn't resist*

Wow, so you use traditional tones? I tried them before, but they were hella hard. D; It looks great
Miss RM86 Says:
This is lovely. ^ w ^