I told you I'd do it, Mama Aayatomi! I told you I'd do it!
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Okay. Be gentle, I'm not very good with traditional media (except maybe pencil and charcoal). I would actually like criticism here because I want to get better. Anyhoo, this is a simple little work with pen, pencil, crayola and prang colour pencils, and crayola markers.
Yes, it's a little shoddy, but then I upped the saturation and contrast to give it a more 'dirty' feel (that's all the modification I really did.) I kind of like it but I think I can do better if I try harder (and seeing as I actually HAVE i'm actually kind of humiliated here...
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Also, the colourpencil marks are a little raggedy because of the board i used (it's not very smooth wood.)
I would go on, but I want some criticism here...nice and constructive please! =D
biun and kitterfly conceptbelongs to aayatomi
artwork to me 2k7
Comments
Uber Man Says:
My excitement is still building.
Bob Ross Quote of the Day: "We don't make mistakes, we make happy accidents."
Goldenavatar Says:
Best feedback I could give you is to keep practicing until you're comfortable with the medium. I can't say anything more then that now, because you've got your own sense of aesthetics in how you draw your characters that has to be respected. Keep ti coming kiddo.
NyuAngelKitty Says:
WOW!!!!
this is awesome!!!! 
Yoru Ryu Says:
Wow, i love his expression ^^ If i were any good at giving crits i'd try to help you, but unfortunatly i'm not. Just keep up the good work
Cat Megex Says:
Um...doesn't he have feathery wings?
Aayatomi Says:
Regardless if the wings are wrong, everything else is perfect, and wings are an easy fix in photoshop with a tablet, right? If you really feel bad about it, you can fix it there, I don't want you to go to all the trouble of drawing it again *even though I love mes teh fanahrtses*
And congrats on getting to sheezycast! All hail to ya! I hope to see more art, though! I miss seeing your doodles, doodli. D:
dana Says:
That is one gorgeously colored face :0
Zennilynn Says:
I noticed the darkmatterlessness, but I think I like this version better. o0o; Take an ax to the ones who say branching off is a bad thing. You took it and made it your own.
And Dana said it all. His face is delicious.
SuperCow100 Says:
I like this alot!
He's all like Pissed off looking, and has sexy bug wings.
Fave. fav
Hotello Says:
I don't know what there is to critique about this. It's sweet A.