As the title says, it's the first page of my comic,
Stereotypical. Plus the title page.
Sooo, yeah. What I wanna know is... if the first page would draw you in to turn the page and keep reading.
So basically, is it a successful introduction?
I did some toning. It's not as apparent because of the grey overcovering most of the page... but that's only there to make the text pop out
Tell me what you think?
Stereotypical (c) to ME. Steal and you die.
Comments
Runesman Says:
I like it.
its is very true. ( Was labeld as a child)
The Undesirable Says:
this is very effective towards the emotions. i feel that wat u said is entierly true! contine!
JohnTheRonso Says:
if stereotypical is the title.... then I guess it's ok, but I kinda think that could be the title of my comic too heh