A shounen-ai 'manga' I'm writing

This is page 12 as the others aren't worth showing -___-;; I scrapped them all anyway~ I might rewrite the beginning sometime~ ...Actually I'd better do that sometime soon...
Anyway, these guys are Andrew (call him Andy - he's the human blonde) and Alexis (or just Alex - he's the dog-boy X3; ). The back story to this is VEEEEEEEEEERY complicated, and RAID is actually a storyline cute out of the whole manga series I plan to write,=, but to cut a long story short: It's based on a planet called Toplia, humans are damn near extinct, Andy being one of the last, and all the rest have been turned into mutants - anthro people

;; Most of them are controlled by a microchip in them disguised as a 'Crystal', but Alex and a few others don't have one, and so help Andy out in his mission to set things right

The two met in prison when Andy was captured, they escaped together and ever since then Alex promised to aid him, and had also become deeply infatuated with him

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The storyline for this is Andy and Alex have rented out an apartment in a foreign country as they've heard a killer named the 'Shadow Assassin' is murdering countless people for money and is apparently one of the last humans. They wanna investigate, but the little 'holiday' soon takes a turn for the worse...
Hope (someone) enjoys!! ^______^
(EDIT) It reads
right to
left!!
Comments
solarsenshi Says:
shounen-ai=the best!
it looks really professional, nearly a real manga!