.:: SISTER ::.
© Helen E. Trevillion 2007
sister, we are the same inside
listening to all the beauty we can find
searching for the fairytale we feel in every
heartbeat, delicately painted in our eyes
you are the flame before it burns
sister, you are the sage before she learns
tumbling through the joy of sweet oblivion
your hands ever open to eternity
you show me
we are already home
you show me
every day we are born
again.
sister, you are a new world
stronger, never afraid to give yourself to the
future as it washes you in purpose and potential
ever captive to the freedom that you are
you are the page before it turns
sister, you are the flame before it burns
you are travelling through the places that I've seen in my
reflection and I know I'm not alone
you show me
we are already home
you show me
every day we are born
you show me
we are never alone
my sister
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I've only just finished this, and am far too excited about it right now to manage to mix it critically. xD So I hope it sounds ok to your ears. :) I'm not really asking for a critique, as I believe it is already complete, and I am content that it sounds as it should. :)
I don't really want to go on and on about this song but it's one of the most significant songs, in my own eyes, that I've written. I love my sisters. My blood sister, my best friend, all my beautiful soul sisters

I just would not be the same without them.
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Preview image: Mine. Do NOT remove this.
Comments
Dark Magician Knight Says:
I like it =)
Lord Welshi Says:
Very beautiful, excellent stuff. Really lovely. What else can I say? Well done!
Minstrel Ayreon Says:
How gorgeous...have you played it for them? I'll bet they love it!

So great to see you back.
Rommie Says:
Awesome job! This is So lovely ^^
Just the song I needed right now.
Celtic Twilight Says:
Splendid, simply gorgeous.
ChronicallySpaced Says:
That's beautiful. The piano caught me immediately... such a gorgeous sound and wonderful music. Your voice is just as lovely. You have serious songwriting skills. Great musicality, tone, balance, everything! There is nothing bad I could say. I'm definitely going to fave this, and I usually don't fave music around here. ^__^
Chazzie Says:
Wonderful job. I love the lyrics especially.
Riot13O Says:
Don't usually favorite music either, but holy crap--what a beautiful piece. I don't think there's anything I can say to give you justice, so I'll just settle for a yes and a fav.

I hope they like it.
AngelsDontKill Says:
There is no better song than a song written out of deep feeling. You deffinately win on this one! As far as the mixing is, it sounds like it was mixed fine anyway, so great work! You're quite possibly the best musician on SA in my opinion. Well, you and Fox Amoore catch a tie. But this song is very nice, just like your others. Once again, amazing!
Laina Inverse Says:
This is beautiful ^^ I applaud you.