I really like this song

It's (again) from Full Moon wo Sagashite. My voice sounds a bit off pitch and nasally, bleh o.o;;; I might resubmit this at some point, because I got some words wrong and weird stuff
Song: Love Chronicle by Myco/Changin' My Life
Sung by Me. - Oh yes, please don't bash my singing without a reason to. Thanks

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Why? I've completely forgotten how to love meetings Will come someday with the beginning of parting Somehow, I have decided upon that idea
You tied my loose shoe laces of my dirty sneakers
Your shy smile suddenly shone in the sunlight
It's not that I love for want of love you gave me the Courage to love straight-forward
The two swear to the journey from now that no matter What occurs, the two hands will never part
Comments
Red Ace Says:
*clears throat* Due to the fact my own reputation as a guy is at stake, I'll just say it's enjoyable (shot me through the heart and painted my mind with beauty T^T) *faves*
emberfox Says:
Wow...this is really good, and i love your singing.
Sanchu Says:
kawaii desu!!! *sparkly eyes*
magnifico!!
you are so talented!! I'm trying to record a song too but I can't find the karaoke version but this is so beautiful!!
The masked ducky Says:
r u japanese? your voice is really pretty!!!
LinksShadowMinigh Says:
you did a great job (even if you did mess up some words..tho i wouldn't know i havn't heard this song before)
mitsukichan101 Says:
WOW thats great ur really good, i wanna sing a song too. Do you know where I can find 'new future' the karaoke??
Merina Says:
Pretty well done :)
Kitsaku Says:
Your voice.... it's... wow. If I knew you in real life, I'd be asking for voice lessons, cause man. That's just pretty.