-carbonated-

by chienein

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< '-dammit-' by chienein

-carbonated-

Cold, silver, aluminum touch my lips
Leaving a brief, inverse burn on skin,
Everything it touches becomes bright white.
I finger the skin, soft organic flesh:

Sappy love song about soda—-and I

The bubbles overflow the thin, wet rim
And slide in only to die on a tongue
They are flavorful and contrast inside
For the temperature, more than nine-one;

Perfect breeding ground for bacteria

Pulling away while the taste slowly fades
I pondered my short-lived adultery
With Pepsi, when I was faithful to Coke.
But, tone matter-of-factly, no one knows

Not like they understand: fizzy-pop-lust.
> '-happy-birthday-horo-' by chienein

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Nov 29th 2004
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Dedicated to Shama.

Something I whipped up because I was uberly bored.

-Chien

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Augustine Says:

That, though interestingly worded, is very good. I like the picture especially. You're a good writer~

yagi DA Says:

Alrighty then. Don't like Coke of Pepsi, but still cool anyway! *glomps*