Tremble... Tremble

by Yuna Uisce

in Completed Works

Tremble... Tremble

You're feeling like you're
the only one in the world
and you've found
the greatest companion.
Tremble... tremble,
all you can do is tremble with passion.

You're heart's so light,
the world so broad,
loaded so mighty
because of possibilities.
Nothing, you think
could ever come between you
and this soaring luck...
Tremble... tremble,
all you can do is tremble with great joy.

And it may last for quite a few days.
Maybe the weeks go by...
you're still feeling the high,
'haps the months begin to pile.
Then one day,
sad to say,
suddenly,
your gut feels the fall,
your limbs catch the spellbound.
Tremble....tremble,
all you can do is tremble with anticipation.

You know right then,
there was somethin' that in turn,
just as easily triggered somethin' else,
and in a hearse,
off to the grave it went
with the words by the other one,
sayin' something like:
'Nah, it wasn't all that tight'...
or they say 'it was a little awkward'...
or 'it just didn't feel quite right.'
Tremble... tremble,
you just tremble with a metal-dense heart.
> 'Falling building' by Yuna Uisce

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Feb 8th 2007
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free verse heartbreak human nature romance
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I was commenting on someone`s art and a phrase popped into my mind... I said to myself, "That`d make a pretty nice line in a poem." The art I was commenting on was that of a "heartbreak" poem... so, I decided to write one of my own..

Santri, I never meant to scare you with this... you know I`m sorry because you thought it meant something.

Image (c) to respective owner. If any objections are to arrise with my posting of it, contact me, and I shall gladly remove it.

Comments

Sanguis Says:

Pretty awesome, I told you you're like a pro =D

Ozzyturtle123 Says:

A loved one died, and the person mourns the grave. Is that what it ment? Very good, BTW,

Vart Says:

Absolutely breathtaking... brought me tears...it reminds me of Kate and her "yeah we were 2 lovesick puppies but i'm tired of this game"