My Bloody Death Deathy Death Heart Blood :(

by eirra

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My Bloody Death Deathy Death Heart Blood :(

My life is
A dark abyss
So dark
And meaningless

So sad
And depressing
Sadder then sadness itself
Isn't that sad?

I wish I could die...

Cause death is
The answer
To life
Death, death, death, death

I write poetry
Because I wish
That I were deader then death itself
That made no sense to you
But it did to me
Because I am deep enough
To think I understand it
Even though I don't
Cause it's so deep

I R not stoopud. I R smert. And Deap.

I hate life
This abyss closes around me and eats my life
And I'm dead
And no one cares
Because everyone hated me...
Do you know why everyone is happy?
It's because they are free
From my GOD AWFUL POETRY!!!

Description

YAY!! Satires! Ok, so this is mroe a satire of Emo poetry then Goth poetry, I guess. Emo's are kinda psoer goths, so... Goths are actually much more sensative then this and deeper, so this is more what a Goth isn't.

Anywho, I was really bored in class last year, and I think it was after Math and Taro and I had been talking about emos and goths, and... you know. Anyways, I wrote this satire or parody, or whatever you want to call it. It's shorter then I wanted it to be, but ah well.

So, anywho, enjoy ^^

Comments

mirrymir Says:

Wow,

I read the poem first, then got kind of angry,

then read your description and I loved it. Because it's so truuuue.

Emo/Goth kids are so fucking duuumb.
Double when they wear nothing but trip and spend all their mom's and dad's money.
Then they cry because mom won't let them have the parent's credit cards.

They must be living the worse life ever, right?

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Taro Says:

Lawl Pretty awesome. This needs to go on GothicDarkMoon!

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evolmickey1 Says:

gray skies are gona clear up put on a happy face when life gives u lemons dance dance like theres a muskrat in your pants when your caught in a down pour with nothing to live for just put on your favorite stance and dance dance dance.... lol

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GoLdMaGeAcE Says:

How tragic, and it explains a lot about our world today
I know, I sound sarcastic, and I quite possibly AM being sarcastic, but this poem really DOES exemplify emo/goth people.

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Dratha Says:

rofl that was totaly awsome! You'll have to show me the Emo hallway so i can point it out to a few former friends lol. nice pemo though!
^^___it means emo poem! lol

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Sorin Ice Dragon Says:

It is one of the most Emo poems I have ever read.

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mirrymir Says:

The emo kids put it up
and seriously cried when they saw it ripped down and the new sign put up with "FCUKING PUSSIES."

why they could put pussies and not fuck, i dunno